• Adam@doomscroll.n8e.dev
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    4 days ago

    Had some of the details super close, then screw up others. Hopefully it’s good though.

    1. She tips the “bulb” of drink despite having just snatched it from the float beside her (whats that gonna do?).
    2. The ship spins to decelerate (would have been done long before “just arriving”), then spins again under fire despite not being slow enough. It should be dodging and returning fire whilst burning to decelerate, it’s why the turrets are turrets after all.
    3. The station is under zero or very low g - but the drone needs constant downward firing jets to hover in place?
    • Mad_Punda@feddit.org
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      4 days ago

      Thanks! I had noticed only 2.

      Then I told my husband about your list and he was like ”that seems like splitting hairs”. Terrible.

  • tenchiken@lemmy.dbzer0.com
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    4 days ago

    Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up… Please don’t fuck this up…